Reply To: Emails and Hooks for Feedback

[Erica]

Okay, I’m back with some feedback!

I’m assuming the hook idea you’re going with was this one ?- “The Age-Defying Pantry: 5 Essential Steps to Stocking Up on Foods That Keep You Young”

To make that a little more concise, we could go with, “The Age-Defying Pantry: 5 Essential Foods to Keep You Young”

I think the email subject lines will work if you just remove the exclamation points 🙂 and then add “Here’s What’s Next” to the last email so people have a reason to open it.

I think the actual content has a lot of value and your ideal reader will be excited to receive it!